By Bob Leduc
A persuasive, convincing sales letter is a valuable marketing
tool. It's also versatile. I regularly use the same text
successfully in all the following formats:
- Printed letter for postal mail

- Email message (personal and on an auto responder)

- Posted as a Web page

- Printed circular for postal mail
Over the years I developed a model to follow when I need a
new sales letter. It consistently produces a profitable letter
on the first attempt. This model loosely follows the well-known
AIDA formula (Attention, Interest, Desire, Action). But I
organized the parts of my model letter in a specific sequence
proven to work best. You can copy this same model to create your
own successful sales letters.
Section 1: Get Attention Fast With a List of Benefits
A sales letter must capture the reader's attention
immediately or it won't get read. Most people accomplish this by
stating their biggest benefit at the top of their letter. I've
found something that works even better. Start your letter with a
list of five or six benefits. Place the biggest benefit first
followed by other benefits in declining order of importance.
Here's the format I usually follow:
How would you like to...
- Biggest benefit

- 2nd biggest benefit

- 3rd biggest benefit

- and so on . . .
Prospects won't be able to resist reading more when you
shower them with all those benefits.
Section 2: Build Interest By Explaining How You Can Provide
the Benefits.
Here's where you describe the features of your product or
service. It's the least important part of your sales letter. Try
to limit this section of your letter to only one or two short
paragraphs. It may be important to mention the triple layer of
new space age insulation built into your picnic cooler (a
feature). But that's not why customers buy it. They buy it
because they want to enjoy ice cold beverages all day long when
they're outside on a hot summer day (the benefit).
Section 3: Develop a Desire To Buy with Logical Persuasion
Most people buy things on impulse then look for logical
reasons to justify their emotional decision. This section of
your letter is where you inject four powerful tools to convert the
reader's emotional interest in your product or service into
logical reasons to buy. They are:
1. A compelling reason to buy from you instead of your
competition. This is called your "USP" or "Unique
Selling Proposition." It's a unique advantage customers get
only if they buy from you.
2. Testimonials from satisfied users. (You do have some,
don't you?)
3. Your guarantee. A strong guarantee can easily double the
number of orders produced by your sales letter.
4. A powerful offer -- the best offer you can afford.
Section 4: Stimulate The Reader To Buy Now
I often see sales letters and Web pages end abruptly with a
weak statement like, "Order Now," followed by a
printed order form or a link to an online shopping cart. You'll
get more sales by gently maneuvering your customer toward the
ordering process with the following 3 steps.
- Command your prospect (in a nice way) to order or buy.
For example:
Don't delay. Take advantage of this Special Price Offer. Call
NOW to place your order or complete the coupon below and send
your order by email, Fax or postal mail TODAY!
- Explain how to order. This can be part of your command
statement like in the example above. Make it easy for
customers by providing as many different ways to order as
you can (Online, postal mail, FAX, telephone, etc.).

- Provide an order form but make using it optional. This
applies online and offline.
Follow this model when you create your next sales letter.
You'll produce a highly effective sales letter -- FAST.
Copyright 2000 By Bob Leduc
Bob Leduc retired from a 30 year career of recruiting sales
personnel and developing sales leads. He is now a Sales
Consultant. Bob recently wrote a manual for small business
owners titled "How to Build Your Small Business Fast With
Simple Postcards" and several other publications to help
small businesses grow and prosper. For more information...